Beginning and Ending to Letters of Complaint

Dear 3B students,

Here is the work we did about beginning and ending our letters of complaint.

 Beginning your letter

I am writing to your office to complain about the plan to replace Whitehorse Park with a large shopping centre.


I am a student and resident of Point Cook, and I am writing to complain about the plan to tear down Victoria Park in order to build a new shopping centre.

 I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the plan to build a new shopping centre in Hopper’s Crossing. I understand that this will mean that Rabbit Park will be removed and I do not think this is a positive change.


I am a resident of Thomastown and I am writing to you because I am concerned that the local government is planning to tear down Quy Park to build a new shopping centre.

 I am writing to complain that you are tearing down the Whitehorse Park in Burwood.

I am writing to your office to express my dissatisfaction about the proposal to build a new 10 level shopping centre in place of the beautiful Elwood Park. 
(note: proposal = plan) 

 I am a resident of Sunshine, and I am writing to tell you about a wild animal, which my neighbour is keeping in a cage as a pet.

 I am writing to complain about a neighbour who is keeping a koala as a domestic pet.

 I am a resident of Footscray and I am writing to your centre because I noticed that a neighbour is keeping a native koala bear as a pet, which I know is prohibited.


I am a resident of Elwood and I am writing to you because I am very concerned about the welfare of a koala bear which my neighbour is keeping as a pet.


Ending your Letter
 I hope that you understand why I am unhappy, and also how important it is to take action. 

 I hope that you understand why I am concerned, and also how important it is that something is done about this situation. 

Yours sincerely, 
Mutjaba Alsaleh, 


109 Burwood Highway, 
Burwood Heights 3135